Malo Cruze! What a successful start to round 2 of online Learning. Firstly, I think you have a real talent for graphic design. Not just with how awesome your packaging is, but the overall presentation of all your work. It is so well set out and your thinking explained clearly, with paragraphs. Excellent. I also commend you on your persuasive writing, making three valid points about the importance of recycling, especially the idea that we should recycle. i enjoyed reading your maths thinking, you made excellent judgments about 3D shapes. Your packaging is fantastic, the theme that you continued through stemming from your brand name works so well and is catchy. It was awesome to see you at all our meetings this week, see you next week!
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Malo Cruze! What a successful start to round 2 of online Learning. Firstly, I think you have a real talent for graphic design. Not just with how awesome your packaging is, but the overall presentation of all your work. It is so well set out and your thinking explained clearly, with paragraphs. Excellent. I also commend you on your persuasive writing, making three valid points about the importance of recycling, especially the idea that we should recycle. i enjoyed reading your maths thinking, you made excellent judgments about 3D shapes. Your packaging is fantastic, the theme that you continued through stemming from your brand name works so well and is catchy. It was awesome to see you at all our meetings this week, see you next week!
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