Another fantastic day of learning Cruze. You have organised all your tasks in clear and interesting way. Your narrative is organised well and you set the scene using describing words very well. I am impressed with your punctuation. How did you find Tinkercad? Your presentation of your chocolate shape, flavour and packaging is very striking. Excellent use of colour and space. Your Maths practise is easy to follow and correct, I wonder how that Maths trick works??Do you have any ideas? Keep up the fantastic effort Cruze.
Thanks Ms G, All the tasks looked really good and I wanted to do all of them but I ran out of time. Im going to try bake the cookies this weekend. Surprisingly I spent more time on the writing part because I hooked myself into the story and i got carried away a bit. Tinkercad also took up heaps of my time. It took a while before I got used to it and the more I explored the more I wanted to add but my mum said to keep it simple with details because I was running out of time.
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Another fantastic day of learning Cruze. You have organised all your tasks in clear and interesting way. Your narrative is organised well and you set the scene using describing words very well. I am impressed with your punctuation. How did you find Tinkercad? Your presentation of your chocolate shape, flavour and packaging is very striking. Excellent use of colour and space. Your Maths practise is easy to follow and correct, I wonder how that Maths trick works??Do you have any ideas? Keep up the fantastic effort Cruze.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ms G, All the tasks looked really good and I wanted to do all of them but I ran out of time. Im going to try bake the cookies this weekend. Surprisingly I spent more time on the writing part because I hooked myself into the story and i got carried away a bit. Tinkercad also took up heaps of my time. It took a while before I got used to it and the more I explored the more I wanted to add but my mum said to keep it simple with details because I was running out of time.
Deletewow good job cruze! so full of facts.
ReplyDeleteThanks Aiden. Did you find that learning about chocolate made you crave chocolate? Cos I did!
Deletehi Cruise I like your story!
ReplyDeleteThanks Lukas. I'd imagine you'd be one of the kids that buried your face in the chocolate and only coming up for air LOL
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