Kia ora Cruze! Another very successful week of learning. I am so impressed with your kiwifruit kiwi! Not just how well you constructed or arranged the image, but the professional presentation is stunning. Using the white plate as a surface and a frame makes the kiwi stand out. Excellent job presenting all of your work, it is a pleasure to read. I think your writing highlighted some good points, especially how gardening is proven to be good for our well being. You used great vocabulary, 'documented, Papatuanuku and kai' which hooked the reader in. Your maths thinking is well set out and I could clearly read all the different ideas and working out ways you shared, great work. So good to see you at all the Meets, see you on Monday!
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Hey Cruze, I think you have linked last weeks work by accident!
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DeleteKia ora Cruze! Another very successful week of learning. I am so impressed with your kiwifruit kiwi! Not just how well you constructed or arranged the image, but the professional presentation is stunning. Using the white plate as a surface and a frame makes the kiwi stand out. Excellent job presenting all of your work, it is a pleasure to read. I think your writing highlighted some good points, especially how gardening is proven to be good for our well being. You used great vocabulary, 'documented, Papatuanuku and kai' which hooked the reader in. Your maths thinking is well set out and I could clearly read all the different ideas and working out ways you shared, great work. So good to see you at all the Meets, see you on Monday!
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