Your explanation writing is wonderful Cruze. You have used paragraphs well to organise your ideas. Using questions to as opening statements is a great way to hook your audience in, well done. Again your maths is presented clearly and your thinking is correct. Excellent!
Thanks Ms Ghent. I got hooked in writing my report when I was researching my topic. I struggled a bit keeping it short with all the interesting information out there.
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Your explanation writing is wonderful Cruze. You have used paragraphs well to organise your ideas. Using questions to as opening statements is a great way to hook your audience in, well done. Again your maths is presented clearly and your thinking is correct. Excellent!
ReplyDeleteThanks Ms Ghent. I got hooked in writing my report when I was researching my topic. I struggled a bit keeping it short with all the interesting information out there.
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