Cruze your writing really had me hooked in! I was curious, wondering what kind off monster or alien would emerge from the rock. But wait...it's the cow that jumped over the moon!! So well thought out, a real surprise and fantastic idea. Your blooper was very funny!
Thanks Ms Ghent. My writing was hard because I couldn't come up with anything interesting to say about the moon and I just wanted my story to end so the only interesting thing about the moon that came to mind was the cow that jumped over the moon. Firing the rockets was heaps of fun. I had another blooper incident off camera where the rocket hit me in my privates. The cool thing about that one though was that I made this other lady laugh who was out walking with her young family and their dog. I hope I made her day.
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Cruze your writing really had me hooked in! I was curious, wondering what kind off monster or alien would emerge from the rock. But wait...it's the cow that jumped over the moon!! So well thought out, a real surprise and fantastic idea. Your blooper was very funny!
ReplyDeleteThanks Ms Ghent. My writing was hard because I couldn't come up with anything interesting to say about the moon and I just wanted my story to end so the only interesting thing about the moon that came to mind was the cow that jumped over the moon. Firing the rockets was heaps of fun. I had another blooper incident off camera where the rocket hit me in my privates. The cool thing about that one though was that I made this other lady laugh who was out walking with her young family and their dog. I hope I made her day.
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