Absolutely fantastic Cruze! The way your describe your ideas about the density of the saltwater is spot on. I like how you made a further prediction about adding more salt. I will say it again, the pride you place in how you present your learning is such a pleasure to see. You continue to grow this skill and strength everyday. Especially noteable is the creativity you used to add more interest to your writing, with the purpose included. Your maths practise is correct and your thinking is well set out. Another excellent day.
Thanks Ms Ghent. It annoys my Mum when she sees the effort I've put into the content of my work and then I just slap it on the slide in the corner somewhere. So at the end of the day I "jazz" it up for her. It does look heaps better and it does make my efforts worth it if it makes people want to read it.
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Absolutely fantastic Cruze! The way your describe your ideas about the density of the saltwater is spot on. I like how you made a further prediction about adding more salt. I will say it again, the pride you place in how you present your learning is such a pleasure to see. You continue to grow this skill and strength everyday. Especially noteable is the creativity you used to add more interest to your writing, with the purpose included. Your maths practise is correct and your thinking is well set out. Another excellent day.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ms Ghent. It annoys my Mum when she sees the effort I've put into the content of my work and then I just slap it on the slide in the corner somewhere. So at the end of the day I "jazz" it up for her. It does look heaps better and it does make my efforts worth it if it makes people want to read it.
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