Kia ora Cruze! Who would've thought you were someone who thought narratives were tricky, you have created a piece of writing that is not only a compelling read but also fill of complex ideas and connected themes. You are a talented writer whatever the purpose, and I think your narratives show how deeply you think and research different ideas. The kereru was a great choice and your reasoning behind your choice made a lot of sense, fashion sense! The changes to their eyes and how they spoke like parrots were nice subtle physical differences. Absolutely stunning concept and well informed mahi Cruze. Thank you for continuing to think outside the square and develop such original ideas.
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Kia ora Cruze! Who would've thought you were someone who thought narratives were tricky, you have created a piece of writing that is not only a compelling read but also fill of complex ideas and connected themes. You are a talented writer whatever the purpose, and I think your narratives show how deeply you think and research different ideas. The kereru was a great choice and your reasoning behind your choice made a lot of sense, fashion sense! The changes to their eyes and how they spoke like parrots were nice subtle physical differences. Absolutely stunning concept and well informed mahi Cruze. Thank you for continuing to think outside the square and develop such original ideas.
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