Kia ora Cruze, wow you and TJ make such a great team when creating! I thought your video was professional and informative. You explained your process clearly while TJ demonstrated the skills needed. So good how you both reflected on what worked and what you needed to problem solve to make the project a success. Speaking of successful projects, how cool is te Rakiraki! You have thought hard about all that is needed to make your innovative idea a success, including diagrams that show exactly how engineering and technology would be used to make Rakiraki a reality. Also considering the shape and design (rakiraki) to help the wildlife is well considered and thoughtful. Your explanation gives a detailed breakdown of the process and purpose, well done. I enjoyed your letter to the council, especially how you began the letter with positives about the Inlet, such a good why to get your targeted audience to read on and listen to your proposal. Another fantastic week Cruze, keep it up, you got this!
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Kia ora Cruze, wow you and TJ make such a great team when creating! I thought your video was professional and informative. You explained your process clearly while TJ demonstrated the skills needed. So good how you both reflected on what worked and what you needed to problem solve to make the project a success. Speaking of successful projects, how cool is te Rakiraki! You have thought hard about all that is needed to make your innovative idea a success, including diagrams that show exactly how engineering and technology would be used to make Rakiraki a reality. Also considering the shape and design (rakiraki) to help the wildlife is well considered and thoughtful. Your explanation gives a detailed breakdown of the process and purpose, well done. I enjoyed your letter to the council, especially how you began the letter with positives about the Inlet, such a good why to get your targeted audience to read on and listen to your proposal. Another fantastic week Cruze, keep it up, you got this!
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