Kia ora Cruze! It was awesome to see how active you and TJ were this past week, I watched your videos and you both kept up the challenge with great skills. Your writing is extremely well written. I read your plan first and I think the mountain planner is a useful tool for you to sort out the flow of your narrative. You have proven that narrative writing is a strength for you, keep that positive vibe in mind during any e-asTTle. You set the build up for the story well, using at least 3 paragraphs to describe characters, relationships and scene setting. This was the beginning of the problem and the transition into your solution showed originality. You didn't leave the reader wondering, everything was resolved and wrapped up in a way that was believable and quirky. You showed your understanding of perimeter and area with the added estimation task of excluded meters well, detailing your reasoning or thinking. Thank you for continuing to comment on peoples blogs Cruze, your genuine and positive attitude is reflected in your thoughtful comments.
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Kia ora Cruze! It was awesome to see how active you and TJ were this past week, I watched your videos and you both kept up the challenge with great skills. Your writing is extremely well written. I read your plan first and I think the mountain planner is a useful tool for you to sort out the flow of your narrative. You have proven that narrative writing is a strength for you, keep that positive vibe in mind during any e-asTTle. You set the build up for the story well, using at least 3 paragraphs to describe characters, relationships and scene setting. This was the beginning of the problem and the transition into your solution showed originality. You didn't leave the reader wondering, everything was resolved and wrapped up in a way that was believable and quirky. You showed your understanding of perimeter and area with the added estimation task of excluded meters well, detailing your reasoning or thinking. Thank you for continuing to comment on peoples blogs Cruze, your genuine and positive attitude is reflected in your thoughtful comments.
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