Kia ora Cruze, what a fantastic last week of term 3 you had, not only with your mahi but all the excellent leadership during your school leader meetings. Well done. I absolutely love the quote at the end, what a smart person whaea Sharlee must be!! Your diagrams and explanations for how the digestive system works are well set out, providing the audience with all the information needed both written and visually. You are creating mahi that is concise, fun and easy to follow. This understanding of how to structure different pieces of writing is now evident when explaining your science experiments. With your signature humour added to make the reading even more enjoyable, e.g. your heart failure. Such in depth analysis shows how dedicated you are to each project. Congrats on the cake win and the TV shout out! Super cool week Cruze, look forward to this terms mahi.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Cruze, what a fantastic last week of term 3 you had, not only with your mahi but all the excellent leadership during your school leader meetings. Well done. I absolutely love the quote at the end, what a smart person whaea Sharlee must be!!
ReplyDeleteYour diagrams and explanations for how the digestive system works are well set out, providing the audience with all the information needed both written and visually. You are creating mahi that is concise, fun and easy to follow. This understanding of how to structure different pieces of writing is now evident when explaining your science experiments. With your signature humour added to make the reading even more enjoyable, e.g. your heart failure. Such in depth analysis shows how dedicated you are to each project.
Congrats on the cake win and the TV shout out! Super cool week Cruze, look forward to this terms mahi.