Wow Cruze! Another fantastic LCS. I especially enjoyed your writing, it reminded me of my son who was also a DragonBall Z addict. The describing words connected to your emotions and definitely kept the reader hooked in and want to read more! Your work is presented to a very high standard and is a pleasure to look through. I found your maths thinking to be very informative, the patterns and connections you made helped me understand the idea more. Keep up the 100% effort.
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Wow Cruze! Another fantastic LCS. I especially enjoyed your writing, it reminded me of my son who was also a DragonBall Z addict. The describing words connected to your emotions and definitely kept the reader hooked in and want to read more! Your work is presented to a very high standard and is a pleasure to look through. I found your maths thinking to be very informative, the patterns and connections you made helped me understand the idea more. Keep up the 100% effort.
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